A few days ago
ttipton24

Humanities paper…help with thesis statement plz!?

I’m writing a paper for Humanities on the Biltmore Estate in Ashville, NC. I’m having a hard time coming up with a thesis statement that doesn’t sound too vague. On my last paper she said it was too vague…I don’t want to make the same mistake again. Thank you for any suggestions!

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A few days ago
jack of all trades

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What do you want t say about the Biltmore Estate?

What about, “The Biltmore Estate in Ashville, North Carolina is an example of the opulant mansions built by the nearly unrestricted greed of the industrialists of the late 19th and early 20th century in America.”

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A few days ago
Anonymous
okay. this is just a suggestion. here in new jersey we have a publication called wierd new jersey. maybe there is such a pubication about asheville that would include some interesting tidbits about biltmore estate.

check out: shadowbox.com for example

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