(insert adjective such as lovely, stark, colorful, strong, ..whatever you feel fits the story)

setting,

(insert adjective such as strong)

character development and

(insert adjective such as interesting,… whatever you feel fits the story)

and theme all contribute to the

(appealing, exciting, fascination, remarkable, whatever you feel fits)

story presented in (Insert book title).

First of all you need to try and limit your thesis statement to one sentence. In this, combine all the information that you can to give the point that you are trying to make. The sentences in the paragraph around your thesis should support this or lead to it, however the statement should be what the paper is about

IE: John and Jennifer’s reckless ways fit well in this book full of bad choices which lead to their eventual happy ending in a place where most would be in despair.

The sentence above would allow you to finish your paper highlighting the setting, characters traits, and theme. As you can see I have mentioned the Characters, trait (reckless), and setting (a place of despair).

It may take a few sentences to find one that works best, but not seeing what you have already written this is the best I can do to help. Maybe use your names and traits as supporting sentences and bring it together in one statement.

Edit: Your question is vague, and you seem unwilling to even click the link I provided which will tell you everything you could ever want to know about a thesis statement. . . here’s another.

http://www.gale.com/free_resources/term_paper/craft.htm

What I’m getting at is that I think you may be using the wrong term when you say thesis. Try this link for more information.

http://www.busyteacherscafe.com/units/paragraph.htm

And, please, don’t get angry. I’m a librarian by training, and we’re trained to point people to information that will help them, not do the work for them. . .