A few days ago
how can i edit this sentence?
im editing an english paper and i cant use weak words (is,am,are,were,was,being-etc).. i cant get this sentence to not use “WILL”—- Seeing topless women in America other than in a rated “R” movie will never happen.
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A few days ago
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Are you sure that’s what you want to say?
How about, “The only place American women are likely to be seen topless is onscreen in an R-rated movie.”
… but have you considered strip clubs? or topless beaches? how about cable tv?
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A few days ago
Having the ability to see topless women in America other than in a rated “R” movie has no chance of happening.
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A few days ago
I consider the appearance of topless women in America, other than in a rated “R” movie, to be impossible both now and in the future. …?!?
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A few days ago
um…Im not sure..how about saying,”Seeing topless women in America,other than in a rated “R” movie most likey won’t be brought about in the future.”
I know it sounds kinda weird…and I dont know all the words that you can or cant use.But I Hope this helps you. =)
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A few days ago
Goodness gracious, that is very difficult. I don’t think it is possible to do that without altering the meaning.
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