A few days ago
Anonymous

Hey please help me…. I am writing an english story for my gcse and i need help with a name?

Right Yeah so gcse english coursework story…. My story is a tale of a sergeant in the police force a day after his birthday going into the station and finding out about a murder. Visits the crime scene sees the 6″+ man lying dead on the bed theres a whole investigation and they go back to search the building realising that without breaking through the bars if tge ground floor shop of the house they would still be inside. with the bars not broken they go in search twice all around the house except for the murder room. they then do this again woried they have missed something. the inspecter not the sergent goes in and screams the sergent goes in and sees a woman obviously his wife dead under the bed who has killed herself with an overdose minutes after killing him with a hammer. thats basically the plot of the story but please tell me what should i call it?

as always 10 points for the best answer and 2 for every other answer anyway

thanks alot!

Top 3 Answers
A few days ago
Chocoholic

Favorite Answer

Beneath Death

reasoing for the title: Beneath the victim you find the killer… also, for a deeper meaning “while investigating the death of a victim you find a deeper problem – a marriage gone wrong.”

If you have to write a tease summary here is a great one…

“Seg. Ryan Lawson has always enjoyed his position in the police force. However, when called to a scene of a bizzar murder, Ryan must discover the shocking details that lie beneath this death.”

Now that teaser isn’t too in-depth, but you can expand on that more since you know more about his character.

good luck, and have fun!

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A few days ago
AutumnFlames
i dont know. depends. im assuming that this story is a third person of the sergeant that you mentioned. if you’re writing it for your GCSE i would suggest a title that doesnt suggest the ending, titles such as “Unforeseen Murderer” kind of titles will put the reader on guard and make it worse because they’ll guess the ending and then it’ll spoil the entire plot. maybe something generic like “The Worst Post Birthday”. my personal suggestion would be “Tainted Secret”. i suggest this because it would provoke the reader into thinking that there’s more to the story than just the story itself, and the reader will think carefully about what’s going on, why did she kill him etc etc. so in a sense your story moves on beyond what you’ve written in paper, but also lets the reader churn what he/she wants to think. but as i dont know the full story i cant say much about it. hope it helps!
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4 years ago
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