A few days ago
Anonymous

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“The fact that Nick cries about his girlfriend’s cheating, shows that he cares most about Native Americans than any other character in this story, symbolizing Nick as the tenth Indian.”

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A few days ago
nerdy_pearlita

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I can’t say because I don’t know the context, but I would make it two sentences:

Nick proved that he cares about Native Americans more than any other character in the story by crying at his girlfriend’s infidelity. Because of this (his concern/affection), Nick symbolizes the tenth Indian.

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A few days ago
cecibluepup
The fact that Nick cries about his girlfriend’s cheating,symbolizes that Nick is the tenth Indian because he shows that he cares about the Native Americans more than any other character in the story

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The fact that Nick cries about his girlfriend’s cheating,symbolizes that Nick is the tenth Indian because he shows that he cares more about the Native Americans than any other character in the story

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A few days ago
TEACHING GODDESS
Since Nick cries after learning of his girlfriend’s infidelity, his reaction shows that he cares more about Native Americans than any other character in this story. Thus, Nick can be symbolized as the tenth Indian.
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A few days ago
RAY R
Nick symbolizes the tenth Indian in this story; he cries about his girlfriend’s cheating, and thus shows, more than any other character in the story, that he cares about the Native Americans.
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A few days ago
LindaLou
When Nick found out his girlfriend cheated on him, tears welled up in his eyes. This shows that he cares more about Native Americans than any other character in this story. Thus, Nick symbolizes the tenth Indian.
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A few days ago
Got rice?
Symbolized as the the tenth Indian, Nick shows that he cares more about Native Americans than any other character in the story by crying about his cheating girlfriend.
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A few days ago
Jules
Two options:

The fact that Nick is affected by his girlfriends infidelity proves his affection for Native Americans, more so than other characters in this story. In this way, Nick can be seen as the tenth Indian.”

Nick is upset that his girlfriend cheated, which shows that he cares about Native Americans more than the other characters in the story; this affection makes Nick the tenth Indian.

Nick can be seen as the tenth Indian in this story; he cares deeply for the Native American in the story. This is in sharp contrast to other characters in the story, and is witnessed by Nick crying when his girlfriend cheats on him.

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A few days ago
BluhBluh
“The fact that Nick cries about his girlfriend’s cheating proves that he cares more about Native Americans than any other character in this story, symbolizing Nick as the tenth Indian.”
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A few days ago
boogie1979
Symbolizing Nick as the tenth Indian, it shows that he cares most about Native Americans with the fact that he cries about his girlfriend’s cheating.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
The fact that Nick cries about his girlfriend’s indiscretions shows his concerns for Native Americans, which surpasses that of others in the story. Nick becomes a symbol of the tenth Indian.
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