A few days ago
wei

Help!!! I need to finish it today! (2)?

This is another part of the article. Can anyboby help me to rewrite it? And find the mistakes in the article? Thanks a lot!

Here is the article:

Human activities, such as direct harvesting of species, introduction of alien species, habitat destruction, and various forms of habitat degradation, have caused dramatic losses of biodiversity; current extinction rates are estimated to be 100–1000 times higher than prehuman extinction rates.

Some measure of biodiversity is responsible for providing essential functions and services that directly improve human life. For example, many medicines, clothing fibers, and industrial products and the vast majority of foods are derived from naturally occurring species. In addition, species are the key working parts of natural ecosystems. They are responsible for maintenance of the gaseous composition of the atmosphere, regulation of the global climate, generation and maintenance of soils, recycling of nutrients and waste products, and biological control of pest species. Ecosystems surely would not function if all species were lost, although it is unclear just how many species are necessary for an ecosystem to function properly.

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A few days ago
Phoebe

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Human activities, such as direct harvest of species, introduction of alien species, habitat destruction and degradation, have caused dramatic losses of biodiversity. Current extinction rates are estimated to be 100–1000 times higher than pre-human extinction rates.

Some measure of biodiversity is responsible for providing essential functions and services that directly improve human life. For example, many medicines, clothing fibers, industrial products and the vast majority of foods are derived from naturally occurring species. In addition, species are the key working parts of natural ecosystems. They are responsible for maintenance of the gaseous composition of the atmosphere, regulation of the global climate, generation and maintenance of soils, recycling of nutrients and waste products, and biological control of pest species. Ecosystems surely would not function if all species were lost, although it is unclear just how many species are necessary for an ecosystem to function properly.

It seems plausible enough… It’s a meaningful article, may I add…

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A few days ago
Anonymous
you have allot of long sentences change some of the unnecessary commas into periods that way it will run smoother
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