A few days ago
carmenclassof06

Feedback and editing suggestions needed!!! 10pts best answer!?

I need help with editing and making my essay more cohesive.

if anyone has any free time..i would appreciate any help, suggestions or examples. if you leave me ur email I will gladly send you what i have constructed so far…

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A few days ago
Tori goes RAWR!

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I will help you and keep helping you until you are finished. Email me: [email protected]
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4 years ago
Anonymous
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Sure! I will deff try to help you. I honestly love editing essays..

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Essays aren’t my strong-point, but I can definitely give you my 2 cents….as long as you aren’t on a time-line.
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A few days ago
tomdawg ツ
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