A few days ago
estevon_cortez_1984

explode the moment? my home work?

i stayed out to late and need this assignment tommorow…

anyone who is a literary whiz wanna help?

if its gotta do wit guilt just pretend?

i am a teacher and need some good examples.

the situation being described in the qoutes below lacks details… imagery…. take te described and explode it.. consider all of the senses; how did the lot look when she pulled in? what was her mode of transportation?

consider the action ; how did the woman walk? did she saunter? did she creep at a snails pace? EXPLODE the moment by adding the missing details that allow the picture to be formed in the reader’s mind!

“THE WOMAN PULLED INYO THE PARKING LOT. SHE LOCKED THE DOORS, PUT A QUATER IN THE METER, AND WENT INTO THE BUILDING.”

what would this story be like from your point of view?

it spose to be 2 written pages so maybe one typed if any one is actually cool enuff ta help it would be an automatic best answer… i will post 100 ?’s and if u answer any i will pick ur answer.

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A few days ago
phangedphluff

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The elderly lady with the beehive haircut pulled her white Gremlin into the deserted car park. She shut off the igintion and contemplated the moment, before checking her makeup in the rear view mirror. She removed her key from the ignition and looked at the keyring. It was her late husband’s keyring. She missed him very much.She remebered how he used to take her to dances whilst on leave – it was the war then. She hummed ‘Moonlit Seranade’ to herself whilst hunting on the back seat for her patent leather handbag.

Oh, what grand days they had been!

She arthritic fingers clumsily grasped the handbag’s strap. She opened the doors and looked around, smartening her dress. SHe reached over and removed her cane from the front footwell, and leaning on it for support, she hobbled around the car, locking the doors behind her, before putting the keys into her handbag. You never knew with these young people nowadays!

She shuffled over to the parking meter and looked for the prices through her bifocal lenses. A quarter for one hour. She fumbled with the bag’s zip and removed her purse. Finding a quarter in the change pocket, she pulled it out and was preparing to drop it into the meter when her hands let it drop. She looked for another quarter. She should really pick it up, but her back was not up to the task. This quarter uwas sucessfully inserted into the machine, and turning on her heel, she shambled off, bent double, in the direction of the elegant Art Deco building. It was a senior citezen’s dance – and her man friend was waiting, holding the door open.

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