A few days ago
Anonymous

editing suggestions !!!! 10pts best answer!!!1?

I have heard the saying that minds can be like parachutes, only operating best when they are open. Open discussions are essential to the learning process as well as personal development. A good discussion brings out various points of view, as well as the reasons behind those views. A good discussion allows each participant to analyze and judge for themselves the content of the information provided without bias. It also provides opportunity for each student to share his or her own opinion. In your classroom when a new concept is introduced there is no telling how many different understandings and interpretations one may have but when you allow open classroom discussion, it births an intellectual challenge; thus allowing the participating students to navigate from previous knowledge to new levels of understanding. You look at classroom discussion as a way to get the students thinking and responsive. I also admire the ways in which you allow the class to challenge theories from the text as well as your own personal conclusions and theories. You challenge us to challenge you with makes the class even more exciting.

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A few days ago
old lady

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Interesting topic.

Just for starters, get rid of the ‘I have heard’. That is inching your way into a discussion starting with one toe, and it isn’t a strong way to open.

Why not simply begin with the saying, “Minds are like parachutes – they operate best when they are open. We’ve all heard this statement, laughed at it, and gone on to something else. But let’s back up a minute and think about how that statement relates to the learning process, personal development and, more imortantly how it relates to open discussion in the classroom.

Then go on as you have.

Your last line – challenge you WHICH makes the class…

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A few days ago
Anonymous
It is one HUGE, rambling paragraph, wearing the reader down after the first sentence. “Minds are like parachutes…” run for the exit.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
You challenge us to challenge you with makes the class even more exciting.

with should be which, thats all i found wrong with this. its very good btw.

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