Another issue in the world is global warming. Global warming is something we have created, and if we tried hard enough, we can get rid of it.

Every year, we lose thousands of trees during the production of common household objects. We can help reduce the amount of trees used by recycling. Doing little things will help the world in big ways.

There were some minor problems with the grammer and verb usage but other then that it was pretty good. You should consider removing the last sentence as it suggests a conclusion. Next time when you start a new thought seperate them into paragraphs to indicate you are going to a different idea. Also expand a little more on recycling on global warming.

You may want to expand additional ways to help, many countrys do send food to help the starving, many of these countries have a civil war, and one faction blocks civilians behind the enemy lines from getting food, afraid it would feed soldiers. Maybe other governments should stepup the pressure on both sides to resolve their problems. Many will go on of course,and they will starve their own people.

In our civil war the North used this weapon, they burned crops in the South if they weren’t going use them. The South starved, and land was destroyed. It broke the will of the South. Some Rebels brokedown and ate leather they wore.

The idea of sponsorship, is a good idea. Maybe suggest that people check the charities spending record, what percentage of the money received goes to expenses like ads, and administration. The charities that put the highest percentages into the field should get strongest consideration.

Trees as you say are big part of the environment. Recycling paper is something I’ve done for many years. In the U.S. the lumber companies have to plant something like three or four trees for every one they cut. Maybe promote and help developing countries start these programs. Maybe challege the class to see how many ways they can save paper, including filing homework online. Trees help with oxygen.

Enviromentists believe hydrocarbons are responsible for global warming. Keep in mind that many fine scientists disagree. Assuming they are right, the biggest way to help is to walk when you can to nearby places. If you use the car, make a list of the stops that need be done and do them all in one trip. This will also save the folks money on the gas saved.

Another way to save money is to restrict big companies to one corporate jet and make celebrities and politicians use commerial airlines. Many of these folks are the ones that cry the most, while producing more pollution than most families will in years.

Use what you will, hope I’ve been some help.

“Can not” should be “cannot”. “Loose” should be “lose”.

I don’t know what the rest of your essay is like; hopefully, this helped. You have a good beginning and this is a good essay.

One more thing: “we have all experienced hunger in some point of our lives” should be “AT some point in our lives.”

~Rennix

With that spelling it’s snowing or raining. Otherwise it’s o.k.