Following these instructions please.

1. Change the general man to a more specific noun.

2. Add an adjective to describe the noun you substituted for man.

3. Add one or two adjectives to describe the room the man entered.

4. Change the word walked and use an action verb that tells you exactly how the man entered.

5. Combine any two sentences into a compound or complex sentence.

6. Move one sentence to another place in the paragraph.

7. Add a transitional word or phrase somewhere in the paragraph.

9. Use a direct quotation and punctuate it correctly. (Have the man say something or think out loud)

10 Change one sentence into a question.