creative beginning,

the 2 reasons how i got that nickname,

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and punctuation.

here is my paragraph please answer with any advice. feel free to criticize if you want to i honestly dont mind…but please dont cuss i am 13 and do not think that is kewl.any way here it goes:

“Hey Monkey!” People shout as they walk pass me in the hall. I got that nickname because I like bananas. I love anything that has bananas in it. Banana muffins, banana yogurt, you name it, I like it. Another reason is because people say I do a really good monkey face. Everyone laughs when I do it. I am very fond of my nickname.