A few days ago
Anonymous

can someone please proof-read my historical biography??

i need help with my attention grabber for the first paragraph!! please???

also, please proof read the remaining. thanks!

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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just wondering 1 thing, was her surname already Adams before marrying??? and don´t repeat her name so often, just write “she” instead (in the first sentence you name both name and surname twice)

sorry,just details I guess, but that´s what drew my attention

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A few days ago
copswife134
If you send it to me as an attachment in a word document to my email [email protected] … I’d be more than happy to correct it for you and send it back.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
first prob.. apart – a part?
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