State your thesis,

Explain the problem of the expectations of the previous generation.

Explain the feelings of girls today.

Explain how you feel about it and restate your thesis statement

Thesis: Girls should have the right to achieve their own standards, and not the standards their parents set for them.

THESE POINTS STATE THE PROBLEM, THE EXPECTATIONS OF THE PREVIOUS GENERATION

?Now that women have the opportunity to become somebody, they feel pressured to do so. Younger women are the ones who are really feeling it because there mothers and grandmothers fought for this respect and rights and now that there daughters have it, they believe that there is no other choice for their daughters but to take it.

?When the mothers were young and ambitious and wanted a high paid job like a man , they believed that they would be happy if they had it.

THESE POINTS STATE THE FEELINGS OF GIRLS TODAY

Now the daughters are pressured to live there parents dreams even if they want to live there own dreams, and be respected for them.

?They feel that there mothers and other people will be disappointed in them if they don’t live up to there parents image.

?Many young women, however, do not understand why there mothers and other people have such high expectations of them.

?They want to become whoever they want, and maybe not the scientific, business women there mothers yearned to be. These modern young women seem to want have there own agenda in life, and be respected for it whatever it is.

?A girl can be super in her eyes not societies

THESE POINTS STATE HOW YOU FEEL IT SHOULD BE

?There is nothing wrong for every girl to strive to perfect, but not achieving perfection is not a bad thing. If girls WANT to become supper girls, they can. Girls should be encouraged to set their own goals and standards.

?It’s time for girls to step up and break away from there mother and grandmothers dreams, and pursue their own.

THESE POINTS ARE UNRELATED

?Colleges and universities and schools should strictly monitor gender discrimination. Just because there are more smart girls applying for college, doesn’t mean they should have a harder time getting in.

?Women want respect to come out of thin air like they think it comes for men. Men, however, have proved to be able to work hard, well and creatively. Women didn’t have that chance. Now that they do, however, they need to work hard and become somebody to get that respect.

?So many girls are supposed to be perfect, that the ones who are, are not getting enough appreciation, while the girls who are not quite as perfect, are being regarding as failures.