A few days ago

can anyone correct the errors in these passages?

I am taking this technical writing class and i am suppossed to correct the errors in the following passages

1. Attempts were made by the staff to assess the proposal.

2. Parking on site is allowed for your vehicle

3. The manager was mad.

4. You should check the roof for damage on a monthly basis.

5. We recieved the manual and found tons of errors upon receipt of the manual.

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A few days ago

Chelsea79

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1. Attempts to asses the proposal were made by the staff.

2. Parking your vehicle on site is allowed.

3. The manager was angry.

4. You should check the roof on a monthly basis for damage.

5. We found many errors within the manual we received.

A few days ago

Anonymous

1) Attempts to asses the proposal were made by the staff.

2) Parking your vehicle on the site is allowed.

3) The manager was angry.

4) You should check the roof on a monthly basis for damage.

5) We found many errors within the manual we received.

Idk, sorry.

A few days ago

lemons

not sure, but i think they’re supposed to be:

1. attempts were made to assess the proposal.

2. parking on site is allowed.

3. ?

4. you should check the roof on a monthly basis.

5. we received the manual and found error.

most of the correction were made becuase of redundancy. i don’t know what to do with #3…

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