A few days ago
Alright need help with a thesis sentence?
That paper I am writing is informative and narration of process.
So I’m discussing the process of having orthodontic braces.
Here is my intro, but I need help with a thesis sentence.
So please..
Intro:
Orthodontic braces are very common among young people and adults. Braces can sometimes be troublesome and take about a 3 year period. First, one must consult with a dentist and if braces are absolutely neccessary, x-rays will be taken. Next, is the process of getting the brackets put on the teeth. Finally, one will have occasional appointments.
So what would be a good thesis to end that intro?
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A few days ago
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So your thesis sentence should say what you plan to prove, or what your point is… so what’s the point?
Try, something like…
This is what you can expect if you are getting braces.
Consider this process and the commitment before getting braces.
just an idea, that’s a hard one
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A few days ago
I am not trying to alter your paper, but in order to be thorough and have your paper to be as long as it should, how about researching a little about the HISTORy of braces?
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A few days ago
Your entire intro shouldn’t have your list of reasons. use those reasons to create your thesis.
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