Is this a wise choice?
I am currently the narrator saying “he” did this “this” is like this. Etc. I do not say who “he” is and what he is doing.
I was wondering if i could continue like this for say 450 words and then change to “I” approached him and recognised who it was whom i had been watching. Etc at the end of the short story to make a sort of twist.
Sorry about al of the “I”‘s and “He”‘s. I wasn’t sure which person they were.
Thankyou so much in advanced anyone that comments anything at all! Even if its a rubbish attempt!!
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What about changing it to `her` and `she` turns out to be a wife?
If I understand what you have written so far… there are a couple of good reasons why “you” wouldn’t recognize “him” at first.
I think you can do it…. and it is a creative idea.
One possibility to have a little joke with your reader by saying that “the object of your curiosity is something that you are reluctant to reveal – especially to strangers – so let’s call/him/her/it “Cypher.”
Good luck with it!
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