what do you think about my thesis?? any suggestions or examples?? what can i add to make this longer? if you need more clarification..please ask…(thanks in advance)

Dear Dr. Strogin,

it was pleasure to be amongst the many students in your introduction to Psychology course this past spring semester. It was a great experience with a great teacher. For me, it was an opportunity to learn about a topic that I only had passing knowledge about – your method of teaching and your engaging personality motivated me to learn more about a fascinating topic than I ever thought I would. Dr. Strongin, you uphold and characterize our university’s mission statement on the basis in which you exemplify quality instruction by being relatable motivating and accessible. In addition you also provide opportunities to each student to develop in a range of areas.