rephrasing correcting anything will do!!! I’M IN A MESS!!!!!!!!!?
do u think this sentence is correct and makes sense for a business report??!
“As for plans to move forward, we can’t develop who does not want to be developed, as far as they are a part of LKJH and happy with that, they will never be developed, but there is a hope if BC and two other provinces has made a territory, as we heard from the media, the Southern Territory, I think the situation will be different, they may have an option to be independent from LKJH and work separately, like SC, and then they will move forward.”
ok this one is a toughie i can’t quiet get what the guy is sayin in this sentence and i dn’t think i can rephrase it to a more formal and NORMAL sentence ….please help
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I hope that helps and reflects what you’re trying to say??
“As for plans to move forward, we can’t develop what is not meant to be developed; if they are part of LKJH and happy with that, they will never be developed. There is hope, however, that if BC and two other provinces combine into a “Southern Territory” as we have heard from the media, the situation may be different; they may have an option to be independent from LKJH and work separately, like SC, and then they will move forward.”
Good luck with the other passage, I have no idea what he is talking about. What do all the abbreviations mean?
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