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I’m asking for an honest critique of the overall style…I already know about the typos but you may still berate me for them if it pleases you.
Any pointers on writing are also appreciated from the bottom of my keyboard.
-Don
Favorite Answer
It is no more a sin to be in good financial health as it is… ‘THAN it is’
It’s what your goals and intentions are, that … Comma not required
the hand of which man has laid his hand upon. Look at this again to see if it makes sense.
you most certainly do deserve it. What is ‘it’ ? Prosperity, I think, but the noun is so far away from the pronoun that it need to be repeated.
One needs merely look . One NEED merely look – I don’t know why, but this is the usual idiom.
to each of it’s most currently do-able units… ITS (no apostrophe needed)
Good luck…
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