A few days ago
Is this sentence structurally correct?
“I figured that since you have access to the largest number of students needing this material, I could potentially sell you the package as a mediary to other students.”
The mediary part seems clunky…if it is wrong, can you possibly re-word it?
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A few days ago
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Simply replace “a mediary” with “an intermediary”.
Nothing seems to be stucturally incorrect.
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A few days ago
I wouldn’t start it would “I figured that…” If I sat for awhile I’d think of something else to start it. But I can’t think right now. I just wouldn’t start it that way, but it’s up to you.
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A few days ago
Is mediary spelled wrong? I couldn’t find it in the dictionary.
I agree that you shouldn’t start with ‘I figured’…
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A few days ago
I am not an English teacher.
change mediary to ‘boon.’
“Since you have ……material, I figured that…
looks better.
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A few days ago
you need either a (;) where you have the (,) or you need to make it two sentences instead of one.
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A few days ago
you should not start with “I figured”
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