A few days ago
notsomuch_

I need help completing this poem…I will give you ten points…?

Head throbbing,

Chest pounding,

The room began to spin.

Nose running,

eyes watering,

______________

Throat twinging,

Stomach burning,

It’s the worst kind of blended pain.

Sinus bursting,

Ears ringing,

The melancholy sound echoes.

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A few days ago
theloverofwords

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how does this sound:

Head throbbing,

Chest pounding,

The room began to spin.

Nose running,

eyes watering,

Don’t think i’ll ever win

______________

Throat twinging,

Stomach burning,

It’s the worst kind of blended pain.

Sinus bursting,

Ears ringing,

Tears coming down like rain

Hair pulling

Brain bashing

Let it come to an end

Legs crumbling

Spine tingling

I need my heart to mend

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A few days ago
bubba gumps light
For if it were not for the attention she took from me only to give herself, the beauty she has, it would not be as though I have never seen beauty, for she out shined even the dim lit room as she passed by with an aroma of love
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A few days ago
HisCowgirl1204
Oh, just to breathe deep again. Or, Oh, just to breathe again.

Or deeply.

Or

When will I breathe again?

This is all assuming of course, that you want it where the blank line is…good luck!

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A few days ago
dterkelsen
…Forward and backward

Across my temples

Ricocheting like a ping-pong game.

Mother I promise you

I will never do meth

I will never ever do

Methamphetamines again.

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A few days ago
Eve
Because, I belong to you.
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A few days ago
p_opus2000
“Hillary might actually win”
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A few days ago
Krranberry
It’s rushing through to my toes

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The aches overwhelming

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