how can i cange this sentence from a run on to sounding perfect?
break it into two – take out words i dont care just please please please help me!
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I like the pairing of gardening books and silk flowers. Very smart.
1. That room, amidst her gardening books and silk flowers, was the place I learned most about life itself-through advice given from a woman, weathered by time, who had herself already lived a long, hard life.
2. That room, amidst her gardening books and silk flowers, was the place I learned most about life itself through advice given from a woman weathered by time; she who had herself already lived a long, hard life.
3. Through advice given from a woman, weathered by time, who had herself already lived a long, hard life; in that room, amidst her gardening books and silk flowers, was the place I learned most about life itself.
A really great phrase…poignant and descriptive. Not really sure about #3, but good luck.
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