A few days ago
hey guys, what about this sentence right here? does it seem polite enough?
given the opportunity, i would like to become a key contributor to your firm.
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A few days ago
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I am confused about the use of the word ‘contributor’; perhaps something else, like ‘member’
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A few days ago
If given opportunity, I would like to become a key contributor to your firm.
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A few days ago
How about this:
“If given the opportunity I feel that I could become a key contributor in your firm.” Sounds a little more confident, ya think?
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A few days ago
Given the opportunity, I WILL become a key contributor to your firm.
Better live up to it when you get hired.
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A few days ago
Well yes but,
Given the opportunity, I WOULD become a key contributor to your firm.
Don’t give them any doubt.
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A few days ago
i think firstbtheir has to be an if in the starting to lend that touch of giving the answere the choice to chose to say yes or no next up u liking to be some thing sounds a lil like u will try but if u dont then do not blame kind so u say i shall strive to be a key player or i shall try atleast to be a key contributors
hope this helps bye
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A few days ago
tell them you ‘would become’ instead of ‘would like to’
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A few days ago
i agree with sweetie pie. tell them what you can do for them. it sounds confident!
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