Help with sentences?

I have a sentence that i need to sound more official

He might not have been the direct cause of Billy Bob’s death but he did not try to stop if either.

Please help revise it.

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A few days ago

jibba.jabba

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Though he may not have directly caused Billy Bob’s death, he certainly did nothing to prevent it from happening.

A few days ago

Ink Corporate

Although he may not have been the direct cause of Billy Bob’s death, he did nothing to intervene

A few days ago

kNOTaLIAwyR

Indirectly, his apathy may have contributed toward Billy Bob’s death.

A few days ago

vanishdorgans

He might’ve not been the direct cause of Billy Bob’s death, but he did not try to stop it.

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