A few days ago
Help make this sentence(s) with description!?
so i’m coming down the stairs, tired as hell i might add, and out of nowhere I accidentally step on my friend Allison’s dog Hilda, right on the tail! It yelps loudly and scared me badly
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A few days ago
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It’s pretty descriptive. Take out the superfluous so, the trite use of hell, use standard tenses, agreement, capitalization and punctuation, and find some adjectives.
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