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What’s more astonishing is that they became family. There is an infinite amount of possibilities, but somehow we are all here now. It’s such a small world.

This is the last sentences of a chapter of a story I’m writing. Please tell me what you think and give suggestions or corrections. Thanks.

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A few days ago

Anonymous

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I like your sentences

however, if you could tell me about the story as a whole a bit more, i could help you more.

it sounds good though.

possibly however… change “we are all here now” to “we all ended up on the same page” or “we all ended up together”

or something like that.

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