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i need to make this sentence stronger like the action words and more exciting do yall have any advice
So pulling on to music row was like crusin down the strip in Las Vegas.
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AS the car pulled on to the boisterous music row, it brought back vivid memories of the pure ecstatic joy with which my ears pulsated, as we slowly cruised down the hypnotic strip in Las Vegas.
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Pulling on to music row filled my head with visions of the flashing lights, bright eyed prostitutes, and vomiting alcoholics of the Vegas Strip.
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