A few days ago
Does this sentence make sense? see below for sentence.?
Here is my sentence I would really no if it makes sense mainly whether I have used the word affluent in the right context:
Juliet is a young, 13 year old daughter of an affluent family…
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Correct! It makes sense.
Affluent is an adjective and you used it perfectly.
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A few days ago
This is the correct sentence. Yours does not make sense.
Juliet is the young, thirteen-year-old daughter of affluent parents.
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A few days ago
You used affluent correctly, assuming you were trying to say Juliet comes from a financially well-off family.
The word 13-year-old should be preceded by an article (“the,” for example) and should be hyphenated. The sentence asking for help was riddled with mistakes.
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A few days ago
it might be better if you just do it like this:
Juliet is a young, 13-year old girl from an affluent family.
(instead of using “daughter”, i used “girl”)
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Affluent alludes to an abundance of money, property, or possessions. Your sentence suggests that Juliet is, indeed, a young woman from a family who has substantial money, property, or posssessions.
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also, you should write out the number ‘thirteen’ ..write out numbers in writing unless it’s over a hundred.
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