A few days ago
Anonymous

Does this sentance make sence?

1. With their new found interest, the students of Brother Paul’s could repeat his dictum word for word.

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A few days ago
Matt F

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Should be like this:

With their new found interest, the students of Brother Paul’s, could repeat his dictum word for word.

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A few days ago
Debbie D
With new found interest, Brother Paul’s students could repeat his dictum word for word.
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A few days ago
kittycat
You might want to rephrase it so it would be simpler and it would make more sense:

Brother Paul’s students could repeat his dictum word for word because of their new found interest.

or

Brother Paul’s students could repeat his dictum word for word with their new found interest.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
say “students of Brother Paul”, not “students of Brother Paul’s”. or say “Brother Paul’s students”.

one or the other indicates possession. don’t use both.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
sure, if Brother Paul’s is a place or somethin and the sentance before had who “he” is, then i dont see why not.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
No it doesn’t. “Students of” implies belonging to so there is no need to put an apostrophe on Paul.
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A few days ago
picador
Hyphen between “new” and “found”. Lose the apostrophe ess.
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