A few days ago
Anonymous

does the following sentence make sense?

I can sense that this company is filled with excitement yet challenging.

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A few days ago
Manz

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I can sense that though this company is filled with excitement yet it is challenging.
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A few days ago
snoopy l
It’s not quite right…

How about this:

1.) I can sense that this company would provide exciting, and challenging opportunities.

or:

2.) I can sense that this company would provide challenging, but exciting, opportunities.

the first sentence sets up exciting and challenging as positives that go together.

the second sentence has a little more drama by putting challenging first (the word is value neutral — some challenges are good, some bad), and then contrasting with but exciting (which shows you recognize the positive potential of challenge, and welcome it.)

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A few days ago
blackathena
It’s a bit awkward. Is the company “filled with excitement”? Who, exactly is excited? The employees? then say that. Or are you excited about working there? Be direct…

“The prospect of working for this company seems exciting and challenging.

?

🙂

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A few days ago
dj_extreme32
I would word it …. I can sense that this an exciting company filled with challenge. Hope that helps.

or simply

This is an exciting company filled with challenge.

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A few days ago
Anna D
no. Try this :

I can sense that this company is filled with excitement but will be challenging.

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A few days ago
Sarah
sure.

The company whether it be people or an actual company is a challenge, but one that is well worth it.

as far as grammar, it’s not great.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
it’s awkward.

try:

filled with excitement and challenges, or

this company is exciting yet challenging.

they should be the same part of speech…

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4 years ago
Erika
the 1st one seems ok. the 2d is a splash uncertain. i think of i could say – the two words, scared and stressful, have been used to describe Lockies thoughts in the direction of the transit. The final is in all probability ok, however the observe allures is very obscure to me. i think of i could attempt to discover a more desirable, greater photograph observe yet none is composed of strategies appropriate now.
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A few days ago
Experto Credo
No, as when you use ‘but’ or ‘yet’, you are expressing a reservation, yet you use two positive adjectives.

The sentence is rather clumsy with the “I can sense” open as well.

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A few days ago
niss
just have the feeling u are attributing a human emotion to a “non living being and thats why to me its inappporiate
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