Do you think this sentence is grammatically fine?
For your further information, I hereby attach a booklet about the information on anything related to the Conference as well as a map of the venue area.
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I hereby attach a booklet of information about the Conference (and related events?), as well as a map of the venue/area around the venue.
Let’s see if we can make it better:
I have attached a booklet for those requiring further information on anything related to the Conference, as well as a map of the venue area.
OR
For more information, please refer to the attached booklet, which contains further materials related to the Conference, as well as a map of the area.
I hope this helps.
sounds better i think……
Don’t quote me on this, though, English is my second language.
I think you would improve its’ readability by placing a comma
after ‘Conference’. Otherwise, fine.
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