A few days ago
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Do these sentences make sense? did i use the word right?

guile-If he were a little more guile then the cops wouldn’t have noticed him leaving.

labyrinth-the boy was put into a labyrinth and he couldn’t find his way out.

medley-I found the medleys in the Little Mermaid very unique.

rapture-i was so rapture in making the steam i forgot about my friends.

aloof-the new kids were aloof from the teacher and her classmates.

verge-He was on the verge of falling off the cliff.

zephyr-I felt a zephyr while walking to school.

if i made any mistakes please tell me and make a new sentence please and thank you

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guile-If he were a little more guile then the cops wouldn’t have noticed him leaving.

Try, If he had used more guile…..

labyrinth-the boy was put into a labyrinth and he couldn’t find his way out.

Sounds ok. Grammar structure might need work, but in theory it is correct.

medley-I found the medleys in the Little Mermaid very unique.

See the Labryinth comment.

rapture-i was so rapture in making the steam i forgot about my friends.

I felt so much rapture while I made steam, I had forgotten about my friends.

aloof-the new kids were aloof from the teacher and her classmates.

The new kids were acting aloof towards ……

verge-He was on the verge of falling off the cliff.

Looks good

zephyr-I felt a zephyr while walking to school.

The zephyer flew over me while I was walking to school.

Been out of school for a while, so I hope these work for you.

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A few days ago
sheyna
guile- If he had a little more guile, the cops wouldn’t have noticed him leaving.

rapture-I was in rapture while I was making the steam, I forgot all about my friends.

Not the greatest sentences I’ve ever come across but those were the only 2 with gross grammatical errors, as my 10th grade teacher would have said. If you made a GGE your paper was given a D.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
you used labyrinth, aloof, verge, and zephyr correctly.

guile would be better as: if he had used a little more guile… (the difference is the verb)

medley could be correct, but i’m not sure if you meant it as MELODY (which is the tune of a song) or as medley (which is a bunch of songs all put together) it’s easier to understand as thus: i used a medley of vegetables in my chicken noodle soup.

rapture is more of a feeling of elation: the rapture i felt when i found out i had one the whole contest was unparalleled!

does that help?

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Most are right on. Here’s what you should correct:

guile–If he had used a little guile, then the cops wouldn’t have noticed him leaving.

rapture–you used it in a way that would more likely use the word enraptured. Try this: The view of the mountains on the horizon put me into a state of rapture.

aloof–The new kid was aloof, so her classmates didn’t work too hard to be her friend.

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5 years ago
Anonymous
It works in that sentence, but there are better ways that you could say it. Because of the often apalling events that soldiers are subjected to, they often return from battle with harsh psychological effects, such as Post Tramatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). I put the abbreviation in there so that you 1) don’t have to type it out every time, and 2) even slower people will understand what you’re abbreviating for. There are many ways you can word this sentence. Play around with it, but try not to make it too complicated. a bunch of complicated sentences makes things hard to read.
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A few days ago
elainie
guile – if he used a little more guile then the cops wouldn’t have noticed anything wrong.

rapture – the movie was extraordinarily good that I was in rapture!

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A few days ago
SV
Your use of rapture is definitely incorrect. Rapture is a noun but you have used it as an adjective.

This is the definition from www.askoxford.com

rapture

• noun 1 intense pleasure or joy. 2 (raptures) the expression of intense pleasure or enthusiasm.

So you would “feel rapture”, or talking about “being in rapture”.

I hope this helps.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
For rapture, the sentence would be, “I was so enraptured in making the steam, I forgot about my friends.” or “I was filled with rapture while making the steam.”
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