A few days ago
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could someone help me in English?i have a redaction to correct for monday. i must describe o love person.?

here is it.

for the others, my mother was, is and `ll always be a strong person. however, as these examples `ll illustrate, she`ll always be a lovely, peaceful, understanding and beautiful woman for me.

mummy is really nice . she could win a game in this field.sometimes, i thinkof the way she used to kiss and calm me down in the nightwhen i couldn`t sleep.she always said:”a bad dream stay a dream, it `ll never be true”.then she is generous.she share with everyone.fo example, she can’t stand seeing someone hungry if she has enough food at home.

moreover, my mother is peaceful.when one of my friends hurted me, she just used to scowl at him. for her:’strengh isn`t the solution,gandhi was right.she taught us that, in order to resolve a matter, you have to act. speaking or shouting ‘ll never be a solution”.in the quater, people call her: the speechless woman.

in addition, mum always know what i mean before i speak.she understands me like no one.

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A few days ago
Me, Too

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Okay, here’s the part I can see.

My mother was, is, and will always be a strong person. However, as these examples will illustrate, she’ll always be a lovely, peaceful, understanding and beautiful woman to me.

“Mummy” is really nice….she could win a game in this field. Sometimes I think of the way she used to kiss me and calm me down in the night when I couldn’t sleep. She always said, “a bad dream will stay a dream. It will never come true!”

She is generous and shares with everyone. For example, she can’t stand seeing someone who is hungry and usually feeds them, if she has enough food. Moreover, my mother is peaceful. When one of my friends hurt me, she used to scowl at him. Like Gandhi, she taught us that “strength isn’t the solution. If order to resolve a matter, you have to act. Speaking and shouting will never be a solution.”

In the quater, people call her “the speechless woman.”

Since Mum always knows what I mean before I speak, she understands me as no one else does.

(That’s as far as I can go, because I cannot see the rest of it. What a beautiful tribute to your Mummy. Stop making a contraction out of the word “will” unless it is hooked to a pronoun like “you’ll.” or “she’ll.” Watch your verbs…especially where you use “hurted.” No “ed” is needed. The word stands for itself.

In order to make English simpler, shorten those sentences. There’ll be plenty of time to use the long sentences when you become a famous author!

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A few days ago
Dragon’sFire
Do not use so many apostrophies, use correct punctuation,

Start a new sentence on the next line!.

Do not use apostrophies on ords like”examples ‘ll”, write it out!. otherwise it is very good!.

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