A few days ago
can you correct my sentence?
“We thought we would have never arrived at the mall because it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.”
i think the grammar is wrong.
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We thought we would never arrive at the mall because it felt like the car was traveling on a road coated with peanut butter.
or
We thought we would never arrive at the mall because it felt as though my dad was driving on a road covered with peanut butter.\
Um, honors English student has some errors in her sentence, I wouldn’t go with her suggestion!
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A few days ago
We thought we would never arrive at the mall; it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.
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A few days ago
We didn’t think we would arrive at the mall because it felt like dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.
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A few days ago
We thought we were never going to arrive at the mall because it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.
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A few days ago
Add a comma and take out the word “have” and take off the “ed” on arrived (i.e. We thought we would never arrive at the mall because it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter).
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A few days ago
Try this… (btw this is coming from an honors English student)
We thought it would have taken an eternity to arrive at the mall. It felt as if my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter!
Turning the sentence into two will help it flow, and adding the exclaimation point adds excitement to the words. I hope I could help!
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A few days ago
We thought we would never arrive to the mall, it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.
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A few days ago
We thought we would never arrive at the mall, it felt like my dad was driving on a road full of peanut butter.
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A few days ago
We thought we would never arrive at the mall because it felt like my dad was driving on a road of peanut butter.
is that what you were trying to say?
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A few days ago
we thought we never would arrive at the mall…
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