Can you complete the poetry challenge? Most creative wins 10 points!?
1)In the middle of the night
2)Smoke on the water
3)Home Sweet Home
4)Goodbye Blue Sky
5)Long as I Live
Poems can be as long as you want about any subject you like. If you need extra time, post your intent to answer so I don’t resolve the question on you! Good luck and have fun with it!
Favorite Answer
In the middle of the night,
On the lake woods nigh my house.
‘Twas a mystical sight!
The wisps were as gossamer
That stirred gently in the breeze
And capered in the moonlight
With a free, peaceful ease.
Vague in the distance flickers
Of light danced, faintly seen,
First magical, then puzzling.
Soon I’d know what they’d mean.
I rose up with the dawning
Of the day and my first thought
Was to understand better
What the night mystery brought.
Grey haze, impenetrable,
Thickly blanketing the air
Harshly bade, “Goodbye blue sky”
‘neath a hot, rose tinted glare.
The fire soon swept round the lake
Demanding my home, sweet home
Come join its charred destruction
Of lifeless blackness and gloom.
Surely, as long as I live,
I’ll always know the stark sights
That follow smoke on the water
In the middle of the night.
a 12 year old with my little night light
panasonic transister underneath the covers with me
My favorite songs which have sadly grown trite
used to fill me with such sweet delight
Now Smoke on the Water’s on retro QRPee
Used to live on a farm, old Home Sweet Home
But the city once called me out to roam
And I kissed the cleaner heavens “Goodbye Blue Sky”
I’ll always regret it, Long as I live
But when you grow up, some things gotta give
And it’s always for the young ones to ask WHY?
Though smoke on the water has often confused me. I always return to the thoughts that amuse me.
Accustomed to comfort I left my home sweet home.
I flapped and I flipped. I stood and I slipped. But I stood on my own. Yes I stood on my own.
Now sometimes I see in the middle of the night, my dreams taking form. Some even take flight.
I’ve battled the blues. I’ve giggled out loud. Been lost in my thoughts but not in a crowd.
Goodbye blue sky? Are you out of your mind?! I’m a lover of life……. And after all…… My name is Sunshine.
I heard God’s footsteps, as I approached death
Home sweet home, He was coming to take me
“I dont want to go and you can’t make me!”
I solemnly promised to God as He stood
“As long as I live I swear I’ll be good”
He laughed out loud as He threw back His head
“Now if I believed that, you’d be already dead”
I finally realized there was nothing I could do
“You go first God,…… I’ll follow you”
Goodbye blue sky, goodbye sin
Gates Open wide, I’m coming in!!
I’d done all I could and nothing was working
While there In the background Satan was lurking!
Smoke on the water, fire in the well,
Kiss me goodbye, I’m headed for Hell!!
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