A few days ago
Cuckoo

Can someone help me structure this sentence?

This sentence is supposed to be the title of my term paper but I just can’t seem to phrase it well. The sentence is “Tanjung Rhu Resort is one of the few resorts in langkawi to be concerned with the environment”. I came up with:

“Tanjung Rhu Resort: Langkawi’s attempt at being environment friendly” but don’t think thats good enough. Help??? 😀

Top 7 Answers
A few days ago
barb

Favorite Answer

Tamjung Rhu: Langkawi’s environmentally friendly resort.

this makes a good title, but not a good first sentence.

When white sand beaches are the norm, and dense forrests studded with tropical flowers surround travellers, few travellers realize the resort maintains beauty while practicing environmentally sound practices.

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A few days ago
maykx
Tanjung Rhu Resort in Langkawi – environment friendly

– or –

Langkawi’ Tanjung Rhu Resort – Environment’s Friend

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A few days ago
Anonymous
I think you’re getting close. How about: “Tanjung Rhu Resort: Langkawi’s Attempt at Environmental Compatibility”?
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A few days ago
sean1201
Environmentally friendly. Langkawi’s; Tanjung Rhu Resort.

‘Attempt’ is a negative in your use. Be positive.

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A few days ago
Eric P
Here’s a suggestion:

“In Langkawi, the Tanjung Rhu Resort is unique, as they concern them selves not only with monetary profit, but with the environment”

This way the reader sees a comparison to what other resorts do (only make money) and shows that this one stands out. Also, maintain an active voice throughout the paper.

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A few days ago
imrt70
I like the beginning, it grabs the attention.

“Tanjung Rhu Resort: Environmentally sound in Langkawi”

Lol, good luck.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
“Tanjung Rhu: Is this the last resort?”

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