can anyone please correct my english for me in the following?
I am a student. I’m pursuing my education to attain a diploma in teaching and I am very passionate about my education.
I’m quite shy but when people get to know me, they find I’m dependable and my company is enjoyable. I like being honest and just being who I am. I’m a person who is positive about every aspect of life and enjoying the good things life has to offer. I like to dream; I like to talk, I like to listen. I like to see the sunrise in the morning, I like to see the moonlight at night; I like to feel the music flowing on my face, I like to smell the wind coming from the ocean. Sometimes I like to be alone and sometimes I like to be surrounded by people. It all depends on mood at that time…
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I am very shy once people get to know me they always find, I am dependable, honest, and very positive, and enjoy being who I am. They come to discover they like and care about me. I tend to enjoy every aspect of life and living my life to the fullest extent! Most want to be around me for my personality, and for the person I am, on the inside and out! Some of the things I enjoy most in life are, talking to others, listening to there concerns and daily feelings, and there companionship. I love to see the sunrise in the mornings, and the moonlight at night! I like to feel the sensations of music on my body! I love the wind when I feel it coming in off of the ocean; it feels so great to me. There are times I love to be alone to sort things out, and then there are times I want to be surrounded with my friends and other people. My life it self depends on the mood I am having at the time it occurs!
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I am a student. I’m pursuing a diploma in teaching and I’m very passionate about my education.
I’m quite shy but when people get to know me, they find I’m dependable and my company is enjoyable. I like being honest and just being who I am. I’m positive about every aspect of life and enjoying the good things life has to offer. I like to dream, I like to talk, I like to listen. I like to see the sunrise in the morning and the moonlight at night. I like the smell of the breeze coming from the ocean. Sometimes I like to be alone and sometimes I like to be surrounded by people.
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