Anyone care to find the edit in this quote?

“We have civilian due process rights for criminals that the government prosecutes.”

Some of you, out there, can see the edit this quote needs!

Top 3 Answers

A few days ago

maddog27271

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Because we are talking about humans, ‘that’ should be ‘who’!

A few days ago

livemoreamply

I’d recast the sentence to read: “We have civilian due process rights for criminals prosecuted by the government.”

Also the word “civilian” may be superfluous unless the context of the article had to do with non-civilian entities.

A few days ago

Sage B

misplaced modifier.

makes it sound like the rights are prosecuted when it is really the criminals.

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