A few days ago
krystal g

HELP ME!!!!!!!!!! please help meeeeeeeeee?

I want to go to medical school …but im not so good at essays and writting and stuff …i mean i can spell and all that but i dont know what i should do??????? I will do anything and all it takes to get into medical school??????? please help???

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here is my essay i had a little professional help with!!!!

When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how much I’ve grown and changed, not only physically, but also mentally as a person In the last couple of years. Less than one month after this photograph was taken, I arrived at North Shore Community College without any idea of what to expect. Around me in this picture are the things which were most important in my life at the time:

I will strive to be a tremendous asset to Northeastern University by devoting all my time to becoming an excellent student. I believe that I am obligated to use my talents in a constructive manner, in a manner that benefits society. The medical career gives me the unique opportunity to express my many talents while benefiting human life.

Going to a medical school and earning a degree has always been a dream of mine. My life, like many others has seen and been through times of sorrow. I have watched one loves in pain, with uncertainty of their future. Just recently a long lost Uncle has reappeared in the lives of my family. Glad to see him him back but, I’m sad and worried about is life. He has been diagnosed with throat cancer, and must under go chemotherapy. Watching his struggles urges me to learn more about steps into recovery and how I can be of help. Cancer rates are at large tacking away to many people too soon.

I believe that my ability to improve and expand my communication skills since I was constantly meeting numerous people which makes me well suited to pursue a medical career. I also consider myself a “people” person. As a sales consultant, I interact and communicate with a variety of people thereby expanding my ability to discuss a wide range of topics. Because people constantly disclosed their personal issues to me, I learned to become not only a good conversationalist, but also an excellent listener. In medical school, I also plan to pursue side work like Volunteering. One of my most rewarding experiences has been helping patients as a Personal Care Attendant.

I am Highly motivated to succeed, I dramatically improved my grades following a time at North Shore Community College. In the past year I have learned a lot through my experiences and relationships. I’ve realized that I was trying so much to make everyone else happy that I wasn’t keeping myself and my interests in mind at times when I should have. Once I realized what goal i wanted to pursue in my life, i plan to work hard to succeed in achieving this goal.

I have been diligent in my pursuit of medicine as a career because I am convinced that medicine offers me the opportunity to live a fulfilling, rewarding life dedicated to helping others. I will enter medicine eager to learn. Attending Northeastern University would be one of the greatest rewards for my motivation and persistence for success.

Top 3 Answers
A few days ago
Blue

Favorite Answer

If you are in high school, ask for tutoring. The same if you are in undergraduate classes. All colleges have tutoring labs and there are older students who need to earn money who are willing to tutor.

You need to be clear and concise in your writing. One day, someones life may depend on the records you keep.

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A few days ago
RT
There is a difference between personal writing, letters, email and notes. Academic writing is much more formal. Cut out the personal stuff and get it simplified with just the facts and information. You present way to much personal information that is not necessary.
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A few days ago
alipes_07
the paper is a bit contrived, but very well done nonetheless.

I would consider writing a better clincher(last few sentences or ideas) maybe something that relates back to your uncle or days at community college.

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