A few days ago
Anonymous

COLLEGE ESSAY!!!! please read!!!?

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When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how much I’ve grown and changed, not only physically, but also mentally as a person In the last couple of years. Less than one month after this photograph was taken, I arrived at North Shore Community College without any idea of what to expect. Around me in this picture are the things which were most important in my life at the time:

I will strive to be a tremendous asset to Northeastern University by devoting all my time to becoming an excellent student. I believe that I am obligated to use my talents in a constructive manner, in a manner that benefits society. The medical career gives me the unique opportunity to express my many talents while benefiting human life.

Going to a medical school and earning a degree has always been a dream of mine. My life, like many others has seen and been through times of sorrow. I have watched one loves in pain, with uncertainty of their future. Just recently a long lost Uncle has reappeared in the lives of my family. Glad to see him him back but, I’m sad and worried about is life. He has been diagnosed with throat cancer, and must under go chemotherapy. Watching his struggles urges me to learn more about steps into recovery and how I can be of help. Cancer rates are at large tacking away to many people too soon. I believe that Doctors don’t just treat bodies they also listen to souls because sometimes the illness is cured by a friend.

Becoming a doctor has always been a passion of mine ever since i was a little girl. Now that I am older that feeling has grown into a heart felt desire. I want to be a doctor so I can serve others and make them feel truly comfortable. I have shared the lives of my patients as a personal care attendant, I have laughed and cried with them. This is what i want to do with my life.

I believe that my ability to improve and expand my communication skills since I was constantly meeting numerous people which makes me well suited to pursue a medical career. I also consider myself a “people” person. As a sales consultant, I interact and communicate with a variety of people thereby expanding my ability to discuss a wide range of topics. Because people constantly disclosed their personal issues to me, I learned to become not only a good conversationalist, but also an excellent listener. In medical school, I also plan to pursue side work like Volunteering. One of my most rewarding experiences has been helping patients as a Personal Care Attendant. As a Personal Care Attendant I’ve learned not only

I am Highly motivated to succeed, I dramatically improved my grades following a time at North Shore Community College. In the past year I have learned a lot through my experiences and relationships. I’ve realized that I was trying so much to make everyone else happy that I wasn’t keeping myself and my interests in mind at times when I should have. Once I realized what goal i wanted to pursue in my life, i plan to work hard to succeed in achieving this goal.

I have been diligent in my pursuit of medicine as a career because I am convinced that medicine offers me the opportunity to live a fulfilling, rewarding life dedicated to helping others. I will enter medicine eager to learn. Attending Northeastern University would be one of the greatest rewards for my motivation and persistence for success.

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A few days ago
Mimi

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get this off here!

someone will steal it and use it as their own!!

its good though 🙂

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A few days ago
justmemimi
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how much I’ve grown and changed. Not only did I change physically, but also mentally as a person In the last couple of years. Less than one month after this photograph was taken, I arrived at North Shore Community College without expectations. Around me in this picture are the things which were most important in my life at the time.

I will strive to be a tremendous asset to Northeastern University by devoting all my time to becoming an excellent student. I believe that it is my obigation to use my talents in a constructive manner- in a manner that benefits society. A career in the medical field will give me the unique opportunity to express my many talents while benefiting others.

Going to a medical school and earning a degree has always been a dream of mine. I, like many people, have been through times of sorrow. I have watched loved ones in pain and with uncertainty of their future. Just recently a long lost uncle has reappeared in our lives. Although I’m glad he is reunited with us, his family, I’m sad and worried about him. He has been diagnosed with throat cancer, and must undergo chemotherapy. Witnessing his struggles causes me to urgently want to learn more about steps into recovery and how I can be of help. Cancer causes way too many people to die too soon. I

Wanting to become a doctor has always been a passion of mine ever since I was a little girl. Now that I am older that feeling has grown into a heartfelt desire. I want to be a doctor, so I can serve others and help them feel great physically and mentally. I have shared the lives of my patients as a personal care attendant, I have laughed and cried with them. I feel strongly that being a doctor one day is my calling.

I believe that I have the ability to improve and expand my communication skills. I constantly meet numerous people- different kinds of people. I believe that this makes me well- suited to pursue a medical career. I also consider myself a “people” person. As a sales consultant, I interact and communicate with a variety of people thereby expanding my ability to discuss a wide range of topics. People quickly feel comfortable with me and constantly disclose their personal issues to me. From this I have become not only a good conversationalist, but also an excellent listener. In medical school, I also plan to do volunteer work. One of my most rewarding experiences has been the privilege to help patients as a Personal Care Attendant.

I am highly motivated to succeed. I dramatically improved my grades following a time at North Shore Community College. In the past year I have learned a lot through my experiences and relationships. I realized that by trying so hard to make everyone else happy, I neglected my own needs and interests. Once I realized what my goal in life was, I became determined to work hard to succeed in achieving it.

I have been diligent in my pursuit of medicine as a career, because I am convinced that medicine offers me the opportunity to live a fulfilling and rewarding life dedicated to helping others. I will enter medicine with an eagerness to learn. To be given the opportunity to attend Northeastern University would be a great reward for my diligence and persistence, and would bring me closer to achieving my ambition to become a doctor.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
thats great dont stresss…they dont decide if you are accepted based on your essay
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