The ideal learner of English as a foreign language would be a person who is interested in learning English. If the individual is not interested, no class will help. The person should also be motivated and should know why they want to learn or improve their English. The most important thing for an English language learner is to practice, practice, practice everyday, and not feel shy to express themselves or to answer questions. Participation in the class and asking questions is very important.

Some of the words that you capitalized did not need to be. The use of he/she is ok, but sounds better if you replace with another word, such as individual or person. Your idea is good, and I wish you well in your pursuit of English. I am not an English teacher, but have been using it as my primary language for over 50 years. Good luck!

The ideal student of English as a Foreign Language would be someone who is interested in learning English. If an individual is not interested, no class will help them. They should be motivated, and should also know why they want to learn, or improve their English. The most important thing for an English Language student to do is to practice everyday. They should always participate in the class and ask lots of questions. They should not be too shy to express themselves or to answer questions the teacher or other students ask.

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How would you describe the ideal learner of English as a Foreign Language?

The ideal learner of English as a Foreign Language would be someone who is interested in Learning English. If an individual is not interested, no class will help them. He or she should also be motivated and should also know why they want to learn or improve their English. The most important thing for an English Language learner is to practice, practice, practice, everyday. They should not feel shy to express themselves or to answer questions. They should always participate in the class and ask lots of questions.

I’m not really good at punctuation but I think this might be a little better. You could put it in MSword and run a check on it.