grammar check junior level college business writing class paper.?
(my grammar check told me to use a semi colon. doesn’t look right.)
2)I have a first hand understanding of the value or lack thereof a degree.
(should there be an “of” after thereof or is that the point of the word?)
Money was not my motivation to want to leave my job, but rather a decent quality of life; still, I needed to pay my bills.
I have a firsthand understanding of the value of a degree or lack thereof.
I have a firsthand understanding of a degree’s value or lack thereof.
1. Leaving my job was to pursue a higher quality of life, yet I still needed money to pay bills. In the end, my motivation was driven by intangible measures, not by money.
2. I have a clear understanding of the value of a degree, and first-hand knowledge of not having one.
The second… i would put “I have a first hand understanding of the value (or lack of) a degree.”
Hmmm, just a suggestion :L
2)no “of” needed when “thereof” is present
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