I am writing to you to follow up my application for machine operator. I went there last week to apply and I just want to inquire if the director has reviewed my Curriculum Vitae.

Hope to hear from your kind office.

It would be better if you avoid making abbreviations such as “CV” so that it would be much clearer to the reader.

I hope this helps.

Good day.

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to follow up on an application I submitted last week for a position as machine operator and was wondering if the Director had reviewed my CV yet. Please contact me at your earliest convienience with any questions or comments you may have.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank You,

Xxxxxxxxxxxx

If you like what you already had, here’s the new and improved version of the grammar:

Good day Ma’am,

I am writing to you to follow up my applications. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV?

Hope to hear from you soon.

Thank you,

Xxxxxxxxxx

Good Luck! *fingers crossed*

To whom it may concern,

I am writing to follow up with you on my application. I was in last week to apply for the machine operator position. Has the director had the time to review my cv? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely, your name

Short and sweet is good. I hope this helps.

P.S. What is a cv?

I am writing to you to follow up my application. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my cv?

Hope to hear from you.

up on my application, not up my applications.

Would you be able to inform me if the director has reviewed my CV.

BTW a machine operator should have a resume not a cv. CVs are generally for jobs that require a post graduate degree or a professional certification. Not a trades license. Appearing pretentious could cost you a job. Avoid it.

For others who ask a CV is a Curriculum Vitae or circle of life, It includes all education experience etc and is much longer than a resume.

Name of director

position in the company (ie Director of Fine Machines)

street address of the business

city and state of business

space

date

space

Dear (director’s title and last name, Ms. ?)

space

I wish you good day. I applied at (business name) last week to fill the position of machine operator and am writing to inquire as to whether my resume has been reviewed.

I am eager to work at (business name), so please feel free to contact me as needed with additional questions or information.

Most sincerely,

Your name

your contact numbers

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I was there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV?

I hope to hear from you soon.

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I applied at your company earlier in the week as a machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV? Hope to hear from you.

Sincerely,

(your name)

Good Luck!

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I visited last week to apply for a machine operator position. Has the director had the opportunity to review my cv? Please don’t hesitate to contact me with any follow-up questions.

Sincerely,

Your name

To whom it may Concerns,

I am writing to do a follow up on my Application I put in with your company last week. I hope all my information was up to the qualifications for the job of Machine operator. Hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,

Your name here.