A few days ago
billy j

my awesome essay?

The ocean’s depth is often measured by kilometres but no kilo’ or metres can measure and/or weigh my personalities. It can be compared, though, with objects that I treasure and relate to. Though my personalities are vast and immeasurable, I condensed it to allow 3 objects that I’ve cherished and built on throughout my life: a light bulb, a metronome and my football cleats. Those three items show the three general aspects of me, academics, music and sports.

Do u think this is a good thesis? Pls give me some feedback

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A few days ago
cgk

Favorite Answer

It’s a decent thesis, but I suggest (if it’s an essay as you said it was) you start off with a hook (attention-getter). This will keep the reader wanting more and your teacher satisfied.
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