A few days ago
my awesome essay?
The ocean’s depth is often measured by kilometres but no kilo’ or metres can measure and/or weigh my personalities. It can be compared, though, with objects that I treasure and relate to. Though my personalities are vast and immeasurable, I condensed it to allow 3 objects that I’ve cherished and built on throughout my life: a light bulb, a metronome and my football cleats. Those three items show the three general aspects of me, academics, music and sports.
Do u think this is a good thesis? Pls give me some feedback
Top 1 Answers
A few days ago
Favorite Answer
It’s a decent thesis, but I suggest (if it’s an essay as you said it was) you start off with a hook (attention-getter). This will keep the reader wanting more and your teacher satisfied.
0
- Academic Writing
- Accounting
- Anthropology
- Article
- Blog
- Business
- Career
- Case Study
- Critical Thinking
- Culture
- Dissertation
- Education
- Education Questions
- Essay Tips
- Essay Writing
- Finance
- Free Essay Samples
- Free Essay Templates
- Free Essay Topics
- Health
- History
- Human Resources
- Law
- Literature
- Management
- Marketing
- Nursing
- other
- Politics
- Problem Solving
- Psychology
- Report
- Research Paper
- Review Writing
- Social Issues
- Speech Writing
- Term Paper
- Thesis Writing
- Writing Styles