A few days ago
Bluey

What can i write for a good intro on persuading people how addiction to drugs/alcohol is bad?

i am writing a persuasive essay on addiction to drugs.

i cannot think of a GREAT introduction to hook the readers, any ideas??

please help

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A few days ago
Math_Maestro

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Here is Alcoholism: (Part/Poem 1 of 2)

“For your own life’s sake, do not be an “alcohol user”.

Any person that likes likes to drink beer, whiskey et cetera is an “alcoholic boozer”!

Do not be an alcohol abuser.

To be more precise, you should be an “alcohol refuser!”

For drinking alcohol is a “mind and body abuser”!

Addictive drinking is a “mind and body bruiser”!

And then if you have cirrhosis of the liver which is a life-loser!

To people that almost drink liquor,

they will most likely be in their graves, that much quicker!

People, the police or sheriff catch driving drunk, are took to jail!

Then they will be put in a cell!

To all drunkards, this is a “cemented hell!

Trying to stop drinking has very much strife!

If you started to drink & decided to stop, you get a longer life!

If you lose your mind,

then you are unable to be kind.

If you drink, just to get drunk,

then your breath definately stinks worse than the spray of a skunk!

You did not think that you would later have costly medical fees!

If you wind up having cancer,

who else can yoe blame? What is your answer?!

Drinking, Drug abuse & Smoking, each is a “temptation”!

And the first time any of the three is done, it may feel like a “sensation”!

This may or may not sound funny,

drinkers, smokers and drug abusers are carelessly using their money!

While they are losing their wealth,

more importantly, they are also losing their health!

Part/Poem 2 of 2: Drug Abuse!

If you take a pill,

at your own free will, just for a”thrill”.

When you run out, how will you feel?!

This originated from a drug-pusher, saying “Let’s make a deal!”

Drug-pushers lead numerous victims, to their kill!

Then, most victim’s bodies are buried “six feet under a hill!”

Being a “dope-atic”

can permanently “put your body six feet below the attic!”

Most drug abusers bodies are are put in a tomb,

not many years “after coming out of their mother’s womb”!

If you are addicted to dope.

It might, can or will “put you at the end of your rope”!

If so, you apparently did not think of how family member could or would cope!

Additional note: if you are addicted to dope,

you are most likely sooner than predicted, “Out Of Hope!”

In other words; avoid this downhill slope!

If you wind up having a heart disease,

you did not to think to realise, that you would have costly medical fees!

If you wind up having brain cancer,

who else can you blame? What is your answer?!

Drug Abuse, Alcoholism and smoking, each one is a “temptation”!

The first time any of the three is done, “it may feel like a sensation”.

This may or may not sound funny.

Drug abusers, alchoholics & smokers are carelessly using their money.

While they are losing their wealth,

more importantly, they are also losing their health!

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A few days ago
racing_jrfan
Instead of drugs just drink the drain cleaner straight for the bottle since this is a popular ingredient in drugs this would kill you a little quicker
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A few days ago
daria12
Go to www.readwritethink.org/materials/persuasion_map/

Addiction is addiction and not a choice, Good luck with your paper.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Theyre not
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A few days ago
wronduer
drugz can kill ur @$$ so don’t do drugz

thats a good into.

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