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this is what i have so far! please help me!?

I need help with this …im not a good writter ..its for my essay to attend a 4year university then attend medical school please help me with this. I want to rewrite it somehow but i cant! please help

am going to just speak from the heart. There are a couple of reasons why I want to go to medical school. I’ve had a rough life when it comes to loved ones being sick or terminally I’ll. My uncle who was a alcoholic who we haven’t seen in 10 years came home 6 months ago me and my family were all in shock to see him. And now we find out he is diagnosed with throat cancer. I want to do everything and anything to help him and make him feel comfortable at home with his family. He has had his Chemo therapy and is doing okay now and still surviving. I also have a really great friend who i have known for a very long time. She is in her fiftys and she has cancer and multiple schlerouses. I work really hard to make her happy and make her feel comfortable. I believe that doctor’s don’t just treat bodies, they also listen to souls because sometimes the illness is cured by a friend so this is a couple of reasons why I want to attend medical school because i want to help patients as much as possible and listen and feel what they are feeling.

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am going to speak from the heart. There are a couple of reasons why I really want to go to medical school. I’ve had a life of hardship when it comes to my loved ones being sick or terminally ill. My uncle who was an alcoholic disappeared for 10 years came back and we were all in shock to see him; diagnosed with throat cancer.

I want to do everything to help him and make him feel comfortable before and if he passes out. He has had his chemeotherapy and is fine now.

I also have a very close friend whom i have known for a very long time. She is in her 50s and she has cancer and multiple-sclerosis. I am trying every possible means to make her happy and comfortable.

I believe that doctors don’t just treat the physical symptoms, they also listen to the inner soul. Sometimes the illness is cured by the close proximity of a friend. these are a couple of reasons why I want to attend medical school because i want to help patients as much as possible both in medicine and psychology and any other psycho-social means to make them live a more fruitful life and to ease their pain.

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