A few days ago
Anonymous

PLEASE HELP!!! what do you think???

I’m writting my essay and i need to know if this sounds ok …or maybe you can help me with it a little bit??? THANKS!

Becoming a doctor has always been a passion of mine since i was a little girl. When i was a little girl I used to play Doctor with my family and always have, now that im older i see my true passion on being a doctor. I love to help others and make them feel truly comfortable. I want to be a doctor with all my heart. I want to serve others. I have shared the lives of my patients as a personal care attendant I have laughed and cried with them. This is what i want to do with my life!

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A few days ago
cutewon

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yeah, that sounds good so far!
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