how to make my poem better, rate 1-10?

Alexandria:

There was a day

When world knowledge

closed eyes

stung lungs

bled noses

A day when dead writers and thinkers acended

swirled in hot winds and ash

stained skin and clothes

stained babies faces with

Octopi, papyrus and cuttle fish carbon

A day when the work of so many

raised up to filter a setting sun

orange, rose gold, lime, purple

Top 2 Answers

A few days ago

that 1 chick

Favorite Answer

i love this 9

A few days ago

Rick

i dont get it but it does sound like a crazy poem… so u get a 6

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